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Post by Steve Harmer on Sept 10, 2006 14:14:08 GMT

Like the depths of Hades cauldron
Or the point of Odin's spear
A hero's fighting ever onwards
Filling his enemies hearts with fear.

With the force of comet and grace of ice
He slays his enemies without thought
His heart burns like the Ifrits fire
He wont rest till the battles fought.

With the stoutness of chocobos
and the light of Kjata
he'll lay down his sword
whens Seph's heads on a platter!

Ok so the ending was cheesy, buts its fun!

"We are all living, in a materia world!"

Gdosimirj Sunset Committed Soldier Just call me Sunset. Posts: 225	Cloud Sept 10, 2006 14:39:55 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Gdosimirj Sunset on Sept 10, 2006 14:39:55 GMT It all starts out dramatic and epic, and by the last line, I'm cracking up. It's great as long as you don't expect people to take you seriously... I'd consider reworking the last line if you do.
	...And she said, "We are all just prisoners here of our own device." In the master's chamber They gathered for the feast They stab it with their steely knives, But they just can't kill the beast... "...Goodnight," said the nightman "We are programmed to recieve You can check out any time you like But you can never leave!"

Squall Experienced Fighter Everyone has to take care of themselves. I don't want to carry anyone's burden Posts: 582	Cloud Sept 10, 2006 15:55:10 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Squall on Sept 10, 2006 15:55:10 GMT Lol classy!
	No matter what happens, even if you become the world's enemy, I'll be your knight

Steve Harmer Administrator Shut up Elena. You're making me sober. Posts: 190	Cloud Sept 12, 2006 17:06:12 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Steve Harmer on Sept 12, 2006 17:06:12 GMT Hehe no the last line is what I like about it. Its a contrast. Bold and cool- Stupid and silly! Or to summarise Bocosilly!
	"We are all living, in a materia world!"

Post by Steve Harmer on Sept 10, 2006 14:14:08 GMT

Post by Gdosimirj Sunset on Sept 10, 2006 14:39:55 GMT

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